fabricatedlunatic said:Heavy Rain is a terrific experience but the story is not well written.
Dude, I can see what you're saying but, I can't really agree that it isn't well written. Lets compare to a human standard, there's little more they could have done. I mean, it's easy to criticize all this in hindsight but, barring the one point you mentioned earlier, you had to really analyze the story to notice these plot holes. Plot holes are only really bad when you notice them, and they seem to detract from the experience. I can see you noticed that one you mentioned previously, but I doubt it really detracted from the story or the game.
I guess this is an agree to disagree situation though.