Outlawstar
Thousand Master
Im really loving how youve coloured this, looks grerat, and its good youve spotted mistakes so you can improve, great work.^^
Outlawstar said:Great work, flowed well and the bubbles are thoughtfully placed, some great detail packed in aswell, without overdoing it.
Same goes for the panels.
One tip Ill give you is to NOT USE THAT FONT.
You should really look into downloading some real comic fonts, adds a great pro touch to your comic.
Try here, and other places too.
[url=http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml]http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml[/url]
Most importantly though, Im intruiged, Ill look forward to the next page.
Voddas said:Outlaw is right about the font. Looks a bit hard and stands out a lil. Great work on your first page though Wildcard. Hope you have time to finish it. Looking forward to seeing more.
Ps. The character in profile doesn't look bad at all. I know what you mean with the difficulties. Can be a total pain. Looking sharp. =D