Just got another idea for a story,,,
Ok first off it starts with a guy who has a grudges a powerful warrior for some reason ( that's not the main focus of story but iv got to.make up something) anyways he has a grudge against this warrior which is a woman and after she gives birth to her first child he steals him and she knows who stole him but couldn't get to the person who kidnapped her some because he went to another dimension for the past 25 year, and she knows that the gate to that dimension won't be opened For that that period of time and is upset about it and wants to kill the man responsible for kidnapping her son, and after 25 years she has 2 or 3 other children which she trains to be come powerful warriors and also during that time keeps telling her 2 or 3 kids about there older brother and what happened to him ( she's a very loving caring mother) anyways wanting to help save and see there older brother and help there mom get him back, after that time the man ( who is also a warrior, a powerful one at that, ) came back to there dimension with her son who has grown up to became a warrior, and is next to the man who kidnapped him, he then tells him to go and get this artefact ( I'm still trying to figure out away for him to distentce him self from him,) and after he comes back he sees a woman kill the man he came back from the different dimension and hide in to a fit of rage and stabs her in the stomach, she's lying on the floor losing loads of blood and she looks up at the man who stabbed her and she could see her [ late husbands in him] and realises it's her son, who was kidnapped, just has he was about to give the final blow 2 of her kids comes in and defends her and if angry at him for stabbing her ( they don't know he's there brother) and the 3 siblings start to fight ( one of the siblings is a girl and the second sibling is a boy " she's the oldest") and from a distance the mother sees her kids fighting and test to get up and stop the fighting, the fight is intense and the man who came from the different dimension " the older sibling" was really powerful and took them on easily but the two other siblings had a idea to beat him ( I'm not really sure how they did it, it's a working progress ) they make him loose he balance and gives him a good knock to the head and is down and just as they go to finish him off there mother shouts them to stop and tells them he's there older brother ( in shock ) they pull there weapons away, there mother maintains they go to her and there older brother pick up the nearly dead man's body and carries him away unnoticed, and the 2 other siblings helps there mother up and takes her home,
After the fight the older sibling who was with the man was upset because he couldn't do nothing to save him from death because of the wound the woman who stabbed him, while he was looking after him the older sibling had flash backs of his time with the man ( who was suprising nice to him during that time and treated him like a son and traning him, and was very close, and after turning 18 he explained to him he kidnapped him as a baby and is sorry he did so but instead of hating him he said " your my father and I love you, we may not be related by blood but it was you who took care of me and looked after me and trained me to become who I am today" so he holds no grudge towards him. explained that she's his mother , and says I know I heard, but wasn't concerned about that but was more concerned about the man who he was looking after, and in he's dying moments he says to him " don't let hate consume you it will eat you up inside and will make you unhappy, live a long and happy life ( the boy was crying and saying yes) and he also said to be strong and dies, the 25 year boy is crying over he's body,
In the mean time the mother explains to her 3 kids that the man they was fighting was there older.brother and asks them to try and talk to him to come back to them, ( she has lost the use of her legs because of what her son did to her) the 3 siblings goes to look for him and finds him at a newly done grave for the man he once knew as father, they ask him to come see there mother ( at first he says he doesn't have a mother but they keep trying to get him to come with them) almost starting a fight and one thing lead to another and decides to go see her, they arrive at there home and sees her and the mother asks to be alone with him ( they was hesitant at first but does so anyways) she asks him to come closer but says he'll stay where he is but she says she wants to get a close a look at him and again says he'll stay where he is, and the man says ( you may be my biological mother and but you killed the man I once called father) and he goes on saying, he knows he's was taken as a baby but he forgave him for that, and also goes on saying that he won't hate her for killing him and says he won't hate her because he learned that hate and killing out of hate wouldn't solves anything he also says he doesn't want to see her again and says he's good byes, he turns around and walks out the door, this makes her heart broken and is bed ridden.
It's working progress but you get the idea, I was also thinking of getting the siblings to hate there older brother because of what he said to there mother but the mother telling them not to hate him,
So what ha think
Then I am your sempai again!
