This is the outline for a poster I'm designing at the moment - was my intention to draw out a little thumbnail then blow it up and trace it at A3. One of my great loves when it comes to illustration was always the old movie posters that kind of told you the story in a single image, so that's what I'm after with this.
The subject matter is exceedingly silly and will probably become quite readily apparent to anyone who watched a lot of tv over the holidays, but in the meantime I'm really looking for any thoughts on the composition of the piece. Each part of it is on a different layer, so I can rearrange it all quite easily at this stage. I'm hoping to stick this in my portfolio for the college if it turns out well, so the more problems I can iron out early on, the better.
Oh and there'll be some jungle type foliage in the top left above the car quite soon.
Edit: First thing to go will be the legs on the figure in the foreground, not only are they wrong, they're also unecessary.