Train_Man: Volume 1 - 8.5/10
Going into this, I had a feeling I'd like it. When you can relate to the troubles of a character, understand his/her logic and feel how he/she feels then it's near enough a certainty that you'll be able to get something out of a story involving that character.
My main (and really, only) complaint with the story is that, for a story supposedly based on reality, I find it hard to believe it actually happened. If a scruffy looking nerd stood up to a drunk and got the hot woman sitting next to him hit hit by doing so, I can't picture the woman giving the nerdy guy her phone number in reality. Likewise, I find it even more difficult to imagine a hot woman following that up by sending the nerd an expensive gift. These things do not happen to losers.
If the above events had really occurred, the nerd would've got himself knocked out, the women would've laughed and that would've been the end of it. A feeble guy trying to act like an hero always ends in failure.
I also find it hard to picture internet people being quite so nice and helpful. If a thread was really made by a virgin asking for advice, surely the piss would be taken out of him and he'd be called a faggot over and over for not having any balls? Real people are not kind.
My final issue with the believability of the story lies with the leads quick transformation from a guy who couldn't even call a girl to a guy who had no nerves over meeting the same girl in the flesh for a date. If it were real, surely the guy would've been ******** bricks over the thought of actually going on a date with a girl? I mean, he had enough trouble just getting his sentences out over the phone!
...but, ignoring my issues with how real the events depicted in the manga are, the story is very sweet and filled with warmth. As a reader, I found myself cheering for the lead from the start, wanting him to succeed. And, ignoring the events that lead up to the actual date, I found the interaction between "Train_Man" and "Hermes" to be very real and cute.
At first I thought the art would distract me - preventing me from thinking of the "beautiful" woman as..well, beautiful, but I ended up liking it by the end of the volume. The long faced, almost cartoony style seems out of place in an age where realistic artwork is the norm, yet it added to the stories charm if anything, taking nothing away.
Overall, a great first volume. I've ordered the other two volumes and will read them whenever they arrive. Train_Man will most likely get a 9/10 from me by the end.
Asa mo, Hiru mo, Yoru mo - 7-7.5/10
Basically, a Bitter Virgin clone that isn't a clone - it came out long before it. I just think of it as a clone because I read Bitter Virgin first and, quite frankly, Bitter Virgin is far better.
The male lead in Bitter Virgin was gentle. On the other hand, Asa's male lead grabbed a rape victim (he wasn't aware) by the wrists and stuck his tongue down her throat.
I couldn't help but feel sorry for the female lead of Bitter Virgin because of what she had endured. On the other hand, I wasn't sure about Asa's female lead because not much in the way of detail was provided and what happened to her wasn't as horrible.
In Bitter Virgin, the female leads transformation from a girl scared of all males to a girl who didn't judge all males because of one was slow and didn't strike me as being far from reality. On the other hand, Asa's female lead changed too quickly because of how short the story was, making her come across as being somewhat fake.
Etc, etc...
My other, non-Bitter Virgin related issue lies with a 60 page chapter that had nothing to do with the story and was never given a conclusion. At first I thought it was going to be a chapter that showed what happened to the female lead andresulted in her being afraid of males, but that turned out to not be the case. Seriously, it was just plain random.
The series wasn't horrible but I recommend you read Bitter Virgin instead.
Dear Friends - 7.5-8/10
A short, 4 x 60 page story about a bitch who uses everybody changing into a better person after she gets cancer and learns the value of friendship. It wasn't bad, but it failed to get a high score because some of the interactions between the characters seemed forced as a result of the short length.
If you've read Deep Love and liked it, you'll probably like this as well.