Aion
Time-Traveller
Note: This topic is for you to post if you've ever gotten into a series, thinking it's amazing, and then gone on to discover that it isn't as wonderful as you first thought. Feel free to comment on my own little rant, but know that commenting on my rant isn't the purpose of this topic. If it was, it'd be in the dead Eden sub-forum.
Also, spoilers ahoy. Only read if you're up to chapter 64 of Eden, or don't give a toss... or have an awful memory.
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Have you ever read eight volumes of a manga before, fell in love with the mangaka's work, feeling certain you'd found a new favourite manga... only for there to be a sucker punch waiting to be unleashed right around the corner? I have.
Eden, right from the start, has jumped around like a rabbit on crack. One minute it was a post apocalyptic drama, with bible references. Next it was an action thriller, involving a thrilling last stand and zombie soldiers. Next it was a gangster drama, involving prostitution, drugs and assassinations. Next it was an erotic comedy, involving a 15-year-old falling in love with an experienced 'lady' and getting called '9 second boy' by the other women around him (at a whorehouse); treated like a kid by all, despite being the son of a drug lord and killer.
Eden doesn't have a main story beyond its premise for the first eight volumes. Really, ignoring the setup prologue, which explained what happened to the world, all that you'd NEED to take from the other volumes is character development and the links between each character. It's almost as if the first half (at least) of the manga is all setup for a big finish; a setup where the scope remained narrow.
Despite all of this, I became obsessed with Eden. Despite all of the different genres and story arcs, and the lack of flow, the content was at such a level throughout that I couldn't help but tip my hat to Endo. And, in between all of the story occurrences, there were character development flashbacks thrown in, which made me care about the characters I was following whilst not seeing a main story thread.
...So, what went wrong? Endo did. He pushed his luck too far. Although it bothered me at the start when he jumped 20 years into the future, after only just having established interesting characters, I understood why he did it: he wanted to keep readers hooked from the start; giving them some mystery to add to the flavour. Or, at least that's what I thought was the case until it became apparent Endo never planned on explaining just how Enoah managed to become the biggest drug lord in South America (I was told, even at chapter 117, there's been no flashback arc). It's lazy at best and incompetent at worst to not at least try to cover the events that occurred during a 20 year time gap. Imagine if you'd read Berserk without the whole 'Band of the Hawk' saga getting time - it isn't that big of a difference.
But it wasn't THAT time-skip that got me. I'd accepted it, becoming too involved with the main characters in the present of the story to cry over the prologue characters not getting developed. No, what really, really, REALLY got under my skin was another time-skip; one that occurred at complete random at chapter 64. I know - Endo is a random guy who sees no problem with jumping around without spelling out the location or date - but just jumping ahead all of a sudden, skipping four years of development in the process, isn't good story-telling. Endo's solution to problems seems to be, if it's too much hassle to explain it, use a time-skip to avoid doing so.
Sadly, worse was yet to come when the details of this new, four years into the future setting became clear. The last time Helena was shown (volume eight) she'd taken Elijah's virginity and the two had fell in love; her healing Elijah's wounds and his innocence giving her something her profession took away from her. They were shown to be happy. But after the time-skip, she'd left Elijah for reasons unknown, run off with some random, never before seen (no joke) cop, and was killed off in a few panels.
WHO THE ****, IN THEIR RIGHT ******* MIND, WOULD KILL OFF THE EMOTIONAL SUPPORT/ROMANTIC INTEREST OF A LEAD RIGHT AFTER SPENDING TIME GETTING THEM TOGETHER? HELL, WHO THE **** WOULD TURN A LIKABLE CHARACTER INTO A CHEAT!?
Helena had became my favourite character because of her bravery, intelligence and sexiness, and she'd became an important character... yet Endo just went, "Hey, let's throw in a time-skip needlessly, adding new characters, and remove the best character in horrible fashion! That'll please people after I just spent a fair few volumes making her - a character from near the start - into a somebody!!!"
I swear to God, I want to punch him. I really do. Never before has a ******* comic book made me angry. I rarely get any emotion about anything. But Endo has managed to **** up in such spectacular fashion that I can't help but visualize my fist connecting with the drawing of a face I was ready to worship some seven hours earlier.
Honestly, I don't think Endo knows how to execute a lengthy series. He can handle short stories superbly, and he can handle a series of short stories with some connections, but he fails when he tries to go beyond that. Even before volume ten - in volume nine - there were signs of Eden slipping when, as randomly as ever, Endo decided to chuck in a seemingly rather pointless China/Muslim terrorist arc - one which focused almost entirely on disposable characters. With the amount of variation in Eden, it should be titled 'Endo's Tanpenshu 2', if anything.
...*sigh* As you can probably tell, I'm feeling ever so slightly pissed off at the direction Eden has gone in. I still want to like it and, though it's tempting, I'm not going to low score it right now. But I can't keep reading it. Instead, I'm going to give myself a 'calming down period' and, sometime next year, buy books 7-12 before continuing. If I keep reading it at the minute, I'm just going to hate it more and more, I feel, and I don't want that. I'd need a dartboard with Endo's face on it first.
Also, spoilers ahoy. Only read if you're up to chapter 64 of Eden, or don't give a toss... or have an awful memory.
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Have you ever read eight volumes of a manga before, fell in love with the mangaka's work, feeling certain you'd found a new favourite manga... only for there to be a sucker punch waiting to be unleashed right around the corner? I have.
Eden, right from the start, has jumped around like a rabbit on crack. One minute it was a post apocalyptic drama, with bible references. Next it was an action thriller, involving a thrilling last stand and zombie soldiers. Next it was a gangster drama, involving prostitution, drugs and assassinations. Next it was an erotic comedy, involving a 15-year-old falling in love with an experienced 'lady' and getting called '9 second boy' by the other women around him (at a whorehouse); treated like a kid by all, despite being the son of a drug lord and killer.
Eden doesn't have a main story beyond its premise for the first eight volumes. Really, ignoring the setup prologue, which explained what happened to the world, all that you'd NEED to take from the other volumes is character development and the links between each character. It's almost as if the first half (at least) of the manga is all setup for a big finish; a setup where the scope remained narrow.
Despite all of this, I became obsessed with Eden. Despite all of the different genres and story arcs, and the lack of flow, the content was at such a level throughout that I couldn't help but tip my hat to Endo. And, in between all of the story occurrences, there were character development flashbacks thrown in, which made me care about the characters I was following whilst not seeing a main story thread.
...So, what went wrong? Endo did. He pushed his luck too far. Although it bothered me at the start when he jumped 20 years into the future, after only just having established interesting characters, I understood why he did it: he wanted to keep readers hooked from the start; giving them some mystery to add to the flavour. Or, at least that's what I thought was the case until it became apparent Endo never planned on explaining just how Enoah managed to become the biggest drug lord in South America (I was told, even at chapter 117, there's been no flashback arc). It's lazy at best and incompetent at worst to not at least try to cover the events that occurred during a 20 year time gap. Imagine if you'd read Berserk without the whole 'Band of the Hawk' saga getting time - it isn't that big of a difference.
But it wasn't THAT time-skip that got me. I'd accepted it, becoming too involved with the main characters in the present of the story to cry over the prologue characters not getting developed. No, what really, really, REALLY got under my skin was another time-skip; one that occurred at complete random at chapter 64. I know - Endo is a random guy who sees no problem with jumping around without spelling out the location or date - but just jumping ahead all of a sudden, skipping four years of development in the process, isn't good story-telling. Endo's solution to problems seems to be, if it's too much hassle to explain it, use a time-skip to avoid doing so.
Sadly, worse was yet to come when the details of this new, four years into the future setting became clear. The last time Helena was shown (volume eight) she'd taken Elijah's virginity and the two had fell in love; her healing Elijah's wounds and his innocence giving her something her profession took away from her. They were shown to be happy. But after the time-skip, she'd left Elijah for reasons unknown, run off with some random, never before seen (no joke) cop, and was killed off in a few panels.
WHO THE ****, IN THEIR RIGHT ******* MIND, WOULD KILL OFF THE EMOTIONAL SUPPORT/ROMANTIC INTEREST OF A LEAD RIGHT AFTER SPENDING TIME GETTING THEM TOGETHER? HELL, WHO THE **** WOULD TURN A LIKABLE CHARACTER INTO A CHEAT!?
Helena had became my favourite character because of her bravery, intelligence and sexiness, and she'd became an important character... yet Endo just went, "Hey, let's throw in a time-skip needlessly, adding new characters, and remove the best character in horrible fashion! That'll please people after I just spent a fair few volumes making her - a character from near the start - into a somebody!!!"
I swear to God, I want to punch him. I really do. Never before has a ******* comic book made me angry. I rarely get any emotion about anything. But Endo has managed to **** up in such spectacular fashion that I can't help but visualize my fist connecting with the drawing of a face I was ready to worship some seven hours earlier.
Honestly, I don't think Endo knows how to execute a lengthy series. He can handle short stories superbly, and he can handle a series of short stories with some connections, but he fails when he tries to go beyond that. Even before volume ten - in volume nine - there were signs of Eden slipping when, as randomly as ever, Endo decided to chuck in a seemingly rather pointless China/Muslim terrorist arc - one which focused almost entirely on disposable characters. With the amount of variation in Eden, it should be titled 'Endo's Tanpenshu 2', if anything.
...*sigh* As you can probably tell, I'm feeling ever so slightly pissed off at the direction Eden has gone in. I still want to like it and, though it's tempting, I'm not going to low score it right now. But I can't keep reading it. Instead, I'm going to give myself a 'calming down period' and, sometime next year, buy books 7-12 before continuing. If I keep reading it at the minute, I'm just going to hate it more and more, I feel, and I don't want that. I'd need a dartboard with Endo's face on it first.
