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Figured I'd better have just one thread for my art, so, it starts here!!!

Here's the latest bit I've been working on... there's a few mistakes I'm not happy about but I'll make do with it, some careful colouring will help with that. Also, I'm going to have a go at doing a decent background (something my pictures tend to lack).

I didn't have a picture to reference from so it's not quite Claymore but you get the general idea lol :roll:
 
Looks really good.
I can really feel that shes moving.
And Im loving the perspective you used for the footbehind her.
Look forward to more.
 
Damn good pic :) I'll do my best to critisize well.

1st is her (as we see it, our) left arm looks uncomfortable. I believe it should come inwards a little more, so it covers some of the arm between the shoulder and elbow. This may need to change the hand and sword postitions, but that will come together in practice.

Love the facial expression here. Aggression is really demonstated in the eyes and mouth. Since she's moving, though, maybe make the hair bend slightly.

Probably just me, but I'd probably prefer the curtain frills above the legs may be better "stitched" slightly at an angle, so it should flow a little more that way. Like Puni Puni Poemy does on this link:
http://www.dvdanime.net/articles/26_6.jpg

Sorry if that seemed harsh, but it's easy to crit compared to actually drawing it. Just keep it up, and I hope I've helped you out. :)
 
Finally finished the colouring. Took far longer than perhaps I should of spent on it... next time I'll stick to simpler stuff!
 
It's been quite a while since I posted on here so I thought I'd update you with what I've done since then... I've actually had a long break from drawing because of work etc, but working away from home has suddenly become a good excuse to draw in the evenings so my productivity has gone up! I hope to keep it up and start a manga at some point, but having done a short manga already it's pretty hard work...!

At_The_Beach_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/At-The-Beach-62727735

xxxHolic_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/xxxHolic-63604811

Jo_From_Burst_Angel_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


This one got published in Newtype USA... I was over the moon!!!

http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/Jo-From-Burst-Angel-66181389

Vento_Pilot_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/Vento-Pilot-66751840

Beware_of_Shrine_Girls_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/Beware-of-Shrine-Girls-68061203

Lovers_by_KyokoHunter.jpg


http://kyokohunter.deviantart.com/art/Lovers-68331939
 
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