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    Round 1 battle 6 Guys

    Yet again I'm having trouble and so is my brother so we'll wait a while till we decide
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Sorry for my boasting, just thought the more I highlighted it would get more people's attention to try and help me. After all not very many people will help something that is not much worth putting effort into and also for the fact it is one of my life's greatest achievements. But yes, apologies...
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    I admit the critizm is hurtful 'CitizenGeek' but I am grateful for your honest. My writing use to be as worse before I took in my first lot of critizm and accepted all the pointers they gave me. So I'll remember to take this in. However, this may of been mentioned a lot sooner, but I wrote...
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Thanks, I have sent a return reply to you.
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Sorry didn't read evangelion rocks' message. but here's half of chapter two the first fight scene. The fight scenes will most likely be the hardest to be honest. Before Genevive could ask Chitso to repeat that, Chitso had already leapt forward, shooting towards his opponent like an arrow. His...
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    I guess your right, it's been quite some time since I wrote a simple short story. However, it'll take me a while to give the whole thing (I lost my pen stick, so I'm requiring some help from some friends to send me the back-up they have). However thankyou, and I am glad you are interested...
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Well, it's kind of word choice and mainly the sentence structure. It has no date though. I'm not interest in writing short stories really, I feel strongly and passionatly about writing novels. But I'm grateful for your suggestion.
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Well alright, where do you wish for me to send it so that you may have a try at it?
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Well it would be nice of someone did, but does anyone here think they can edit a 75,000word novel with bad gramma.
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Tried that, I contacted two popular publishing subsidy people and let one of them read it. The one that read it, said it was brilliant and the best submission they had ever had, when they were a company that lasted for 80yrs. It was very flattering the letter they sent me. It sounded like...
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Why thankyou for your interest, I am very flattered. I will send them once I get home. Thankyou again.
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    Searching for a cheap editor

    Hallo, I'm someone trying to publish a book called 'Chitso Samake, the Kiton's curse'. It's been influnced by much Anime, and it took me one month to complete the first batch '50,000'words. Many people have really enjoyed my book, but the big problem with it that I am having trouble finding an...
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    Round 1 Battle 5 - Girls

    Tessa, although I feel I should reconsider. This one so far has the most anime girls I know and it was indeed a hard decision.
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    Round 1 Battle 4 - Girls

    Took me quiet the time to consider, but I guess I'll vote for Masane Amaha
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    Round 1 Battle 4 Guys

    Kakashi Hatake, he is the only one I know out of this battle (yes, I haven't seen 'that' much Anime) and my brother has big hopes that he wins.
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    Guys first round battle 3

    He's my little brother, do you require any proof? Phone number, picture or questions?
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    Guys first round battle 3

    You don't mind me pointing out that they are twin brothers
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    Round 1 Battle 3 - Girls

    Aisha Clan-Clan
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    Guys first round battle 3

    Might as well go for Yoh Asakura
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