The Tale Of Uzumaki Naruto

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You made this, right?

If so, well done. Its overall well written.

I think one of the key points about how it is good, is how it starts after something as happened, and then we learn and build a picture in our minds about what has happened, as we read.
 
Nicely done, really. Just put a "might have spoilers" as I don't believe the fox demon warning has been published here already or even the mangekyo sharingan.

Bt, well done :) looking forward for the next chap.
 
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