Some guy

K

Kurogane

Chuunibyou
Uncolored, but a new drawing:

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I think the facial details are decent this time.
 
you've got the clothes and body proportions down to a tee, but your faces somehow allways look the same. It's the only thing letting down your work in my opinion.
 
Nyu said:
you've got the clothes and body proportions down to a tee, but your faces somehow allways look the same. It's the only thing letting down your work in my opinion.
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I know, I know, and it's sending me mad :x

Can you tell me EXACTLY what is making it bad looking? - because I know it doesn't look quite right, yet I can't figure out what I should change either.

What a paradox. :cry:

Anyway, here's the colored version:

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Hyaku said:
Can you tell me EXACTLY what is making it bad looking? - because I know it doesn't look quite right, yet I can't figure out what I should change either.

What a paradox. :cry:
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it's not that is makes it bad looking, but it's just like the same design on each character and it doesn't matter if they are female/male etc. For example that face looks like the one you done on vegeta which looks like the one you done on the girl a couple weeks ago.

You can do the hair etc fine but the shape of the head/eyes/nose is always the same. Try doing a different shape of head or a different eye design. Just things to distinguish from the others.
 
Nyu said:
Hyaku said:
Can you tell me EXACTLY what is making it bad looking? - because I know it doesn't look quite right, yet I can't figure out what I should change either.

What a paradox. :cry:
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it's not that is makes it bad looking, but it's just like the same design on each character and it doesn't matter if they are female/male etc. For example that face looks like the one you done on vegeta which looks like the one you done on the girl a couple weeks ago.

You can do the hair etc fine but the shape of the head/eyes/nose is always the same. Try doing a different shape of head or a different eye design. Just things to distinguish from the others.
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Ahhh, I see. :D

I've always had trouble drawing female eyes, so I just try and make them as unisex as possible. >_>

Something to practise on though, and I'll take note next time I draw something.
 
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