new art

[xx[chii]xx]

this is a pic i drew bout 15 mins ago of my friend ( who actualy looks alot like ed from fma ) theres something wrong with it but i cant figure out what so suggestions would be appreciated.

 

[Doberman Pharaoh]

Looks great to me. Extremely good drawing.

 

[xx[chii]xx]

Looks great to me. Extremely good drawing.

Thanx

 

[Lelouch]

good shading, Wish i could shade like that.

 

[Outlawstar]

Looks excellent.
You should post more often.