Faye Valentine, at least it's supposed to be ;D

K

Kurogane

Chuunibyou
This is supposed to be Faye, with a few things modified: o.o

I didn't exactly do a great job on the face and hair, but I'm satisfied with how the rest turned out. ^^
 
Two things I don't like:

Legs a little far apart and... it seems like the guns are floating. Apart from that it's good stuff, mayn, should've commented on your drawings earlier, got some talent. ; D
 
Lupus Inu said:
Two things I don't like:

Legs a little far apart and... it seems like the guns are floating. Apart from that it's good stuff, mayn, should've commented on your drawings earlier, got some talent. ; D
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Yar, it was supposed to have the effect that she's just holding them freely, almost like they're very loosely gripped - didn't quite get it right though ;'/

Regarding the legs; I always tend to do that with all the characters I draw xD
it's one of those things that I do without noticing 0.0'

Thanks for the constructive criticism though ;D
 
Her face is too unrealistically shaped, I don't know if you're going for a realistic look, but her cheekbones go in far too sharply, culminating in a very small chin, also her face is scary as hell.

Then again I'm totally drunk right now, so take what I'm saying with a pinch of salt.
 
Doberman Pharaoh said:
Her face is too unrealistically shaped, I don't know if you're going for a realistic look, but her cheekbones go in far too sharply, culminating in a very small chin, also her face is scary as hell.

Then again I'm totally drunk right now, so take what I'm saying with a pinch of salt.
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Naw, I agree 100%. I can never draw facial features very well, especially in certain styles.

It sucks big time :lol:
 
its not a bad drawing. Faults though, the face is too sharp, it would be better smoother and the legs seem to far apart. The shading though is well done. If you want suggestions..i would think practice on faces would be good, cause i think you can do better with them.

On a side note..i think i'll finish off the last drawing i was doing lol.
 
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