A Work In Progress

[Sy]

Behold, something i'm working on when i'm doing nothing better. Tis a comic. I hope to finish it by the end of the year. Thinking of posting it chapter by chapter on a site as I get it done. Here's part of the page i'm working on at the moment.

 

[Pomtry]

Thats some great work but the fingers dont look right to me.

Whats the comic going to be about?

 

[Jaymii]

Gotta say grats on your style, I like it.

 

[Doberman Pharaoh]

The foot looks weird as well.

 

[Jaymii]

The foot looks weird as well.

Thats some great work but the fingers dont look right to me.

Its comic, People don't complain about The Simpson's having four fingers and being yellow yet for some reason people pick on little things from works in progress.

 

[Sy]

I've given up caring if it's going to be perfect look anymore, just as long as it looks close to what it's meant to and it can be understood when it's seen. After all it's probably only going to be looked at for a few seconds at the end of the day before they flick to the next page.

Anyway it's a story about a girl. Thats all i'm gonna say.

 

[Jaymii]

I've given up caring if it's going to be perfect look anymore, just as long as it looks close to what it's meant to and it can be understood when it's seen. After all it's probably only going to be looked at for a few seconds at the end of the day before they flick to the next page.

Anyway it's a story about a girl. Thats all i'm gonna say.

Named "Mari"

 

[Sy]

No. That's just a brand name I made up.

 

[Doberman Pharaoh]

The foot looks weird as well.

Thats some great work but the fingers dont look right to me.

Its comic, People don't complain about The Simpson's having four fingers and being yellow yet for some reason people pick on little things from works in progress.

I'll complain if I ******* want to mate.

 

[Outlawstar]

Now now calm down.

 

[Sy]

He's ******* good at complaining.

Whiz pop.

 

[Lupus]

Hey, hey, hey. At least Mustaine posts up his own work, which is actually his. >_>

Also, I see no major problems with your work, and it'll probably develop into something quite good, carry on and post when it's done.

 

[Kurogane]

Great style, really clean and polished.

The only thing which caught my eye was the foot. o.o;

 

[Sy]

Oh, it's not shaded yet but i'm only going to go back and do that when the linework's all done.

 

[Sami]

Oooh~ Looks interesting!
I can't wait to see more of it :]