I really dont know why Im doing this because I'll probably just get told its a piece of crap (which it probably is)
Ok, just before you read my poems, dont expect anything funny, its drastically the oposite of that. I have no idea why the hell I wrote these poems, just because I was bored I suppose but I did put quite alot of effort into them so If you could read them and give me some honest feedback then it would be much appreciated. There may also be a few gramatic mistakes
P.S. Its suprisingly dark and gloomy poetry from a 16 year old, to be honest Im not really sure what posessed me to make them so unhappy because Im not like a goth or anything (no offense). So enjoy I guess.
And please only mature people, not in an age sense but mental age :lol:
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/memory.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Ablaze.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Torment.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Voices.rtf
Ok, just before you read my poems, dont expect anything funny, its drastically the oposite of that. I have no idea why the hell I wrote these poems, just because I was bored I suppose but I did put quite alot of effort into them so If you could read them and give me some honest feedback then it would be much appreciated. There may also be a few gramatic mistakes
P.S. Its suprisingly dark and gloomy poetry from a 16 year old, to be honest Im not really sure what posessed me to make them so unhappy because Im not like a goth or anything (no offense). So enjoy I guess.
And please only mature people, not in an age sense but mental age :lol:
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/memory.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Ablaze.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Torment.rtf
http://members.aol.com/zwanster03/Voices.rtf